Okay, well! I sometimes worry that I'm not getting across some of the things Mello's thinking or feeling, because, in an attempt at Death Note genre style, Mello hides 90% of what he, well, thinks and feels, and pretends at something else instead. Sometimes I wonder if I'm failing with that, so -- Does it come through? How's my driving with Mello?
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